rythum of the summer night


 



The sun setting behind the ocean,

as the moon rises from behind

a mountain of gold

 

the sky jade and blue with

a yellow to gold tint across

the sky

 

summer rain 

falling down to the grass

gently blowing my hair

 

the stillness

of the night ,as the shadows

gently fall around

 

take a breath

feel the cool air

caressing your skin

 

your heart in rythum

with the falling rain

you are re born,you feel no pain...

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sweetwater's picture

Beautiful makes me think of

Beautiful makes me think of warm summer nights, sue.

word_man's picture

a warm summer night,aool

a warm summer night,aool breee and misty rain looking out at the lake and amountain with the sun setting

thank you


ron parrish

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I wish I was there! 

I wish I was there! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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don`t we all,,thanks  again

don`t we all,,thanks  again


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patriciajj's picture

This was worth a second read,

This was worth a second read, and I enjoyed it even more as I relived the startling imagery. (Love that "mountain of gold"!) It drifts feather-light and angelic down the page. A gorgeous creation. 

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glad you came back,it makes

glad you came back,it makes the poem seem even better


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NF_Angel's picture

Great Poem. Beautifully

Great Poem. Beautifully written.


*~I know I'm blessed, but I'm cursed to ~ NF*

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thank you for the visit

thank you for the visit


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Cascade's picture

I hope you don't mind that I

I hope you don't mind that I review this again. I wasn't going to, but I really do love it. It's my favorite  Wink

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glad you liked it,,thank you

glad you liked it,,thank you


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bishu's picture

Sounds good my friend

The outdoor is scary ~b~


©bishu 

 

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thank you bishu

thank you bishu


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Januarian's picture

So very powerful, this poem,

So very powerful, this poem, and it needs no attached picture or audio track to have its tremendous effect on the reader.  There is something this poem captures; so deep that I cannot put a name to it, but it is certainly there, and the poem adrotily draws it forth.  This is the brass ring that many of our peers cannot quite seize . . .


Januarian

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just a spiritual moment in

just a spiritual moment in time,thank you for the visit


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patriciajj's picture

Mesmerizing in its flow,

Mesmerizing in its flow, enchanting in its imagery, this awakens the senses on different levels. I love the moon rising "from behind / a mountain of gold". A bolt of glory right there! An absolute joy to read. 

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thank you pat

thank you pat


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Cascade's picture

This is awesome, Wordman!

This is awesome, Wordman! It's like a tranquil, peaceful, spiritual, meditation.

I love it. May be my favorite of yours so far. 

That first stanza is golden. Then you accentuate it with stillness and peace and love.  It's an emotional painting. A poetic work of art.

 

 

 

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wow cascade you made it sound

wow cascade you made it sound much better than it is but i will take it


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