I have touched your soul
and you have touched mine
and we will be together alway`s
if only in our minds.
Two souls meeting in the night
two wrongs doesn't make a right
but our hearts locked
and our souls entwine.
We danced in the stars
solace we can find
so forever we will always be
because i touched you
and you touched me ...
Just stopping by for a second
Just stopping by for a second read, and the magic hasn't faded: still a lilting, timeless and gracefully crafted pleasure to read and comment on. An ecstatic escape.
thank you at for the nice
thank you at for the nice review
ron parrish
Hypnotically beautiful,
Hypnotically beautiful, lilting, shimmering and sad, this has all the elements of a memorable love poem. These lines have a truly classic quality:
"We danced in the stars
solace we can find
so forever we will always be
because i touched you
and you touched me ... "
thank you pat,you made it
thank you pat,you made it sound even better
ron parrish
dance on dance on
dance on dance on
under the stars for evermore
under the stars for evermore
ron parrish
This brief reply, which is,
This brief reply, which is, of itself, incredibly beautiful, should be part of the poem as well. It fits in so well.
J-Called
thank you starward
thank you starward
ron parrish