the church,
under the milky way skies
as she strolls golden meadows
looking for more
stars winking,
as she looks, to the sky
for the creator,
of love and life
she feels his presence
from clouds rolling by
as she stares
at the milky way sky
animals gather ,
to watch her pray.
as she walks
under the milky way
searching for the creator
to touch his face
with angels watching
singing amazing grace...
This amazing poem, my
This amazing poem, my favorite of yours, called me back for a second round of wonder. The sublime, inspiring, soul-affirming experience of finding the Divine in the everyday, outside of human structure, is perfectly captured here.
Lovely poem offering
Lovely poem offering beautiful images. sue.
thank you sue,good to see you
thank you sue,good to see you
ron parrish
You took us to a beautiful
You took us to a beautiful place here. Endearing images and enjoyable rhythm create a moment in heaven. Patricia
thank you for reading
thank you for reading
ron parrish
Loved every twinkle it
Loved every twinkle it brought to my mind's eye. Beautiful soulful imagery! Thank you hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thank you for the visit
thank you for the visit
ron parrish
Excellent poem in both
Excellent poem in both imagery and the message it delivers!
Starward
thank you for the visit my
thank you for the visit my friend
ron parrish
My pleasure!
My pleasure!
Starward