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Silence
Silence
rolling through my brain,
as fast,
as a fast moving train.
through
the portals,
of my mind,taking me back,
back in time
where
memories run deep,
deep into my soul,
a place,only i can go.
like
a waterfall,
falling from my mind
taking me back,back in time...
Beautifully written.
Beautifully written.
*~Be Legendary ~ Ian Mascoe*
thank you for the visit !
thank you for the visit !
ron parrish
Enjoyed the write
Brain..... fast moving train....
waterfall... falling from the mind
Much much liked good friend
©bishu
thank you much,good to see
thank you much,good to see you my friend
ron parrish
I throughly enjoyed reading
I throughly enjoyed reading this poem, although having noticed Hemaidy's comment about the begining I feel only the word 'train' may be changed, it's a little out of context with the rest of the poem, a bit harsh. But even if you kept it in it is still a great poem. Sue.
thank you for reading sue,i
thank you for reading sue,i really havent took the time to edit it !
ron parrish
That was exceptional it's as
That was exceptional it's as if you spoke my mind!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thank you for dropping by !
thank you for dropping by !
ron parrish
Memories
Some so precious, some worth not revisiting, but I've been thinking about memory lately - and decided thinking more of the future and moving is better than getting lost in so much rich history. Brief visits work - nice write. - slc
thank you for reading !
thank you for reading !
ron parrish
Ya Welcum!
Always can find something entertaining or educational and occasionally giggle worthy - yr poem pal from Michigan. Nice rose - slc
then it is yours in every
then it is yours in every color !
ron parrish