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Lay me down,By your side
I want to,
lay down by your side;
feel the warmth,
from your heart.
Feel your love,feel your pain,
as it flows,
from your soul,
in to mine.
I
want to,
lie down,
by your side.
Hold you close,
your body next to mine,
feel your love,
till i die...
The timing and the layout of
The timing and the layout of the verse was just right the pace had sympatico with the beat and the emotion -'well done:)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thank you very much,been away
thank you very much,been away for a few days
ron parrish
its a good feeling huh?
its a good feeling huh?
young with alot to say
lol,for many years i have
lol,for many years i have shared those feelings,thank you for the visit !
ron parrish
Sweet
Lovely,tender poem:)
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
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thank you for the visit !
thank you for the visit !
ron parrish
That was Lovely !!!!!!!!!
Wow
©bishu
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thank you mr bishu,hope you had a great thanksgiving
ron parrish
Heaer Glowing Write
This is what love poems should do to the reader, warm and nuzzly - Liked one whole lot!
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thank you for reading !
ron parrish