Always
Anytime you are in trouble,
losing a life once so happy,
whose time passes by with pain
and the world hurts deep inside
you will see me standing here
side by side with you forever
A short love poem
time passes by with pain made me think of james taylor you got a friend.
Enormous assurance compressed into such a small space---that is classic! I wish I had been able to talk to the ladies like that when I was your age.
One suggestion: change who's to whose to achieve grammtic propriety in the third line.
Starward
time passes by with pain made
time passes by with pain made me think of james taylor you got a friend.
Enormous assurance compressed
Enormous assurance compressed into such a small space---that is classic! I wish I had been able to talk to the ladies like that when I was your age.
One suggestion: change who's to whose to achieve grammtic propriety in the third line.
Starward