Can't you see, through my arms open wide?
Pass the smile and the growing facade.
To what I really think,
What I really feel.
You fool hardedly wished to follow me
But your alone now,
Set down with my apology.
I cannot help you.
I never really wanted too.
I wanted to leave you.
That’s what I was trying to do.
So sorry I used you,
But only for a time.
Now I am looking for a better find.
You were not worth it,
I knew it all along.
You would have been my destruction
And I had to save myself.
perfect... yeah its a good poem with rich idea and sweet composition of words... the way you did it is nice and heart feeling of course... so I can say that you are a good poet with sweet poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?