'If you had two bullets, who would it be?'
The question brings me to my knees
I think to myself
And only one name comes to mind
I was holding on to nothing I find
And only one name comes to mind... you
You are the person of whom I thought I wanted
I thought you were the perfect person
I was blind to your imperfections which you hid deep inside
And often placed behind your lies
You took my face, looking in my eyes
But the truths you told were only lies
I think to myslef
And only one lie repeats its self
The heaven I held turned to hell
And only one lie repeats its self... you
And so many nights of prayer were all in vain
A bullet in your back is only half my pain
As I pull the trigger and the single bullet escapes
The hell that stood begins to be erased
As you fall to the floor and scream like a train
The bullet in your back did not enter a vain
So as it's hard to do, I must finish what I started
With the barrel to your chest, this ones in the heart... and
'If you had two bullets, who would it be?'
The answer I find is dead infront of me
I thought I loved you
Just another of your lies
I'm glad you took two
Otherwise, I myself would have died
wow! thats all i can say is wow! i am so impressed by this poem. i really felt your anger and just your raw emotion. you were able to put into words the thing it seems like i am always thinking. thats awesome.
I liked that. I like the initial question...makes one think...
WOW! that about sums it up for me. its an amazing improvement, i love it, honestly. NOW i know what you were truly meaning and how you felt. PLEASE, PLEASE keep it up !
P.S.
thanx for the comment it means alot to me!
Really catchy title and i think the 1st stanza is awesome but i kind of lost interest during the 2nd and last stanza. i dont wanna tell u what to do but i would have described how and why i would put a bullet through "YOU". and what about the second bullet, is it for yourself?
with much respect,
ME