As I cross rudder by rudder
Over this mysterious sea of faith
Ahead of me a land of warm sand
My toes wiggle as I anticipate
Yet beyond fun in the sun
I see an unknown kingdom
Of inexplicable jungle
Should I pursue?
Or sit here and enjoy the view
The clear waters inviting blue
A calming enticing hue
Tells me it is alright
To let go of holding tight
To the familiar crew
So I pick up the pace
I hastily race to the future
I dive in take a swim
Ooohhh that feels so good
The grains under my feet
The salty warm water sweet
I look across to see it
Yes the bridge is still there
I take a walk into the dread lock
Of branches and vines
Their leaves and fruit intertwine
The protective green hands of shade
Fanning me cool sublime
Causing pains of past to fade
Dense peace
Potent supply
Intoxicating the dry
A river of joy and plenty
Flows from in here
I would have stayed at the bridge
Pinned to the ropes with fear
If the ebb of flow did not
Challenge me with a dare
good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?