Once, I lay down on the grass
And gazed up at the sky
And saw the face of one I loved
In memories, alive.
I closed my eyes and thought
Of all the things I'd done
The way I ran away from love
And hid behind a mask.
Now that you're gone,
There's nothing but
The times
We left behind...
And so, I look up at the clouds
And see the heavens smile.
While tears blur the world around me
I give a slight, faint smile too.
Because I know exactly why
The sun is shining down on me,
And all the memories and dreams
Of all the things
That could have been.
Very nice! I love how you
Very nice! I love how you express yourself here as the remorse drips off the paper. We have all been in this position at one time or another so this should be relatable to all. This is wonderfully written. Great job with this one also
Thank you! "the remorse drips
Thank you! "the remorse drips of the paper" exactly what I meant to do! Amazing! Thank you very much..