The end

No one can feel the pain I'm feeling, 

The emptiness inside,

Trying to stop the tears

I no longer want to hide

The nervousness flowing through my body

that is actually no longer alive,

The struggle for finding a reason,

A sign not to stay behind. 

 

I'm dead. I lost the battle ages ago,

I thought corpses couldn't feel,

So why am I in this sorrow?

 

Nothing to hold onto,

Nothing I have dear,

I can feel it coming,

The end. The end is near.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Hey this is my first posted poem. Constructive Criticism is highly appreciatedSmile

Poets_be_cool's picture

I love this poem. it's so

I love this poem. it's so strong and beautiful! I just love it!Smile