Innocence is pure

Never such innocence,

Never so pure,
The crimson is passion,
You are real. 
 
No surface needed,
For we are what we are, underneath,
Scratching beneath shows weakness?
He made us to be grateful,
All we do is sin. 
 
pldappls's picture

this is pretty good. i have

this is pretty good. i have to say i enjoy your style from what i've looked at. the two lines i think are where the most power is at. blah blah blah excellent piece