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Able to do.........?

Not able to do
But better to do
Negative makes critical
Positive takes verticle
Hope n wait's are
Horizantal roads
To reach the beatch
Be cam till the pitch
Simle after catch the fish

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last updated 4 December 2011 - 4:00pm
©28 November 2011 - 6:32am — vvbhatus
28 November 2011 - 9:21am — msjwh
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hey? A question for you.

I love your poetry, but I have a question. What country are you from? It seems as if English may not be your first language. You're still awesome, though. Good job!

30 November 2011 - 5:29pm — vvbhatus
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hi

I am from India, My monther toung is kannada, i.e Indian local language in Bangalore, Karnataka, I know 3-4 languages including english, I studied English as second language

30 November 2011 - 5:53pm — msjwh
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Please continue to write poetry on this site. You are brilliant!

1 December 2011 - 5:15pm — vvbhatus
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thank U

Thanks a lot