the monster that is my mom...

i'll lock myself in

inside my room

so i wouldn't have to face

the monster wondering outside

scared and alone

i'm stuck in this room

she tempts me to come out

with her angelic features

than catches me

with her devilish ways

no one can see the evil within

evryone says she's such a good person

no one noes

about the thing she hides

the thing every one fears

the devil inside

you ask who she is?

do you really want to know?

who this creature is?

so i'll tell you who it is

who's got me locked up in this room

she is my mother

and der's nothing u can do

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jgupta's picture

Hi , First please take a look into the mirror.

Joe Logsdon's picture

I see you've been blessed by Jayati Gupta critiques as well. If that's what you want to call them. I didn't like her views on my poems either. I thought they were very hurtful considering she didn't know the whole story.

I on the other hand, loved this poem. It makes complete sense and you do not need a mirror. Don't listen to her. Your poem is lovely and I'm going to bookmark your postpoems site so I can continue reading your wonderful poetry! :)

Keep up the good work, and don't take Jayati Gupta too seriously. I know I didn't and everything's working out just fine :)

Joe~