love is pain
sooner or later
you'll know wat that means
u broke my heart
u set me free
u wanted nothing
to do with me
i sat there crying
wondrin wat i did wrong
was it sumthin i said
or was it the things i did
u didn't tell me
all you said
was a lonesome goodbye
and walked out da door
out of my life...
hey, nice work. i liked it alot. i really loved this part.
"love is pain
sooner or later
you'll know wat that means"
keep writing, buddy.
-manduh
My boyfriend just broke up with me like this as well. I wish he could just tell me why. But life is unfair a lot of the times.. I like that your poem is in all lowercase it makes it seem as if no words are important that they are all equal to each other.