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The First Time
It's the first time
You tremble and shake.
He asks "Are you ready?"
You nod and whisper yes.
Soft kisses at first
Then more and more.
He touches your body
Then slides off your clothes.
You feel so nervous
But your ready, you know
Light kisses grow passionate and strong as you go.
He's ready now
He gives you his sin
Slowly as he pushes it in.
You feel the pain as you hold onto him tight
Your bodies sink together as you try to keep quiet
Finally it's there and the feelings grow strong
The feelings so great
As he caresses your body
His warm tongue lingers over all that is naughty.
His large hands roaming over your skin
All that is erotic felt deep within.
Breaths grow harder as he moves in and out
You want him to take you
Inside and out.
You're both so hot, you know your almost there
You hold on tight, as you both stare
Into eachothers eyes, before it's all done
Then he lets loose as he begins to cum
One last feeling surges through your bodies
As he lays light kisses upon your lips
Ending with the lingering touch of his arousing fingertips...
Interesting. lol. Not much to say about it except that it's good and you have talent. Luv Ya Mucho
i love this one its so cute...i love it!!!!
I like it :)
Joe~
hey girl, i dont care wut any1 else says but i think this is an awesome poem. yeah u may not have experienced it yet but that doesn't mean u can't imagine wut it would be like....lol that sounds a lil weird but yeah u know wut i mean.
::Cough::.....And what was the inspiration to this one? lol not much i can say about this one cuz you know how i am but it is good....yeah....ok lol
now this was how it really is great great job much respect j.
makes me scared lol. good job tho... its an experience ull never forget