If it were possible to walk upon the seas
Or to float among the clouds amid a breeze
To swallow none but fat and gain no pound
Or for man to tread the earth and shake the ground
To suffer mortal wounds yet cease to die
Or better yet to win but never try
Then dreams would never ultimately end
And fantasies would cease to be pretend
Happiness would be a thought away
For you would love me more with every day
Everything that's wished would come to be
And never would you stop loving me
Again there'd be no need to force a smile
Again you'd have me swimming in denial
Again I'd try as hard to catch your eye
Again I'd wipe away the tears you cry
Again you'ed make me laugh when I am blue
And again I'd choose to fall in love with you
this is probably my favorite. i read a couple, but you have so many, it would take me days! i realy appreciate your critiques on my own, and i will end up taking some of your advice. your poems are very powerful, like my own. love them :)
Ah, if dreams could come true. It's nice to have memories that are worth living over. This is a good poem, one that has a very elegant style. You take the time to order your words and thoughts, which makes for better poetry, I think. I'm glad you are posting stuff again. See you around.
Nathaniel