Let me push this pencil slightly
To draw her picture for you lightly
Let you fill her empty spaces
Give her hopefull happy faces
Let her kiss me, let me hold her
Do not bend distort or fold her
Lay me down and let me keep
Her wrapped within my arms to sleep
Can you give her memories
Fill her with dreams and fantasies
Make her want me to be near
Let me take away her fear
The nervous feelings fall away
Her every action makes me stay
Let her now realease the strain
Let go of her forgotten pain
Wipe her crimson tears aside
Let her come to me to hide
Walk into my web of fire
Show her my passionate desire
Give her soft and supple lips
Place my hands upon her hips
Tell her goodbye but never leave
Feel her hands crawl up my sleave
Night lit curtains softly blow
Moonshine makes her figure glow
Whisper softly in her ear
Words you make her want to hear
When I caress her make her quake
Drive her crazy; no mistake
Daylight burns the misty air
As I fiddle with her hair
Let her look into my soul
Let her vacant heart be full
Let every word and every stir
Manifest my love for her
Lying here alone with me
Her picture's all of her I'll see
You and her are just a dream
A river where there was a stream
This happiness you can't allow
But let me hold her, just for now.
i think this one is favorite. i keep coming back to it and rereading it. it really does paint a picture. it's beautiful.
OH WOW!!! that was really really great, u write real good poems. i read ur bio, ur pretty interesting, lol. but n e wayz this poem the best ive read yet. keep writing!!!!
First, let me say that I adore this poem. I've been sitting reading it over. It's beautiful!
Second of all, I am incredibly impressed with your profile and what you had to say about all poetry being good and having a meaning. It's just so true!
Thank you for the comments you left about my work!
I'd like it if you kept in touch :)
Hazel
I love this .. it has a lot of meaning to it and it reminds me a lot of somethin i went threw. I can relate to this in a lot of wayz that i never thought n-e-one could put into words. congrats on this. i think its amazing. you have a real talent..
Oh wow I love this. It's everything I've ever wanted someone to say to me! lol...great
It's lovely, but I don't know what to think of it...Who's it for?