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Solitude's Savior
Shimmering silently screaming out loud
Fighting emotion I’m secretly proud
The acting is over the play is complete
But I still refuse to succumb to defeat
My hand is bleeding but no ones around
I face my seclusion and fall for the ground
In violent response the wind rushes by
Hoping to calm the nerves of the sky
Failing to do so the rain starts to pour
As we both beat emotion on earth’s muddy door
The lightning flashes I’m startled to see
The storm and the wind has fallen with me
Solitude’s savior found me that day
Helped me up and showed me the way
I can not repay this goddess in gold
She only takes payment in friendship I’m told.
I really like this poem. I think my favorite line is "As we both beat emotion on earth’s muddy door". It's so vivid! Your words make it so easy to picture what you're talking about. I really like the last stanza a lot as well. Great stuff!