I watch the two of you
I read in between your lines
I can feel the love burning in you
but how sad for the two of you
those boundaries that you call
the distance that's so far
the yearning for your souls
and the feelings you control
but your poems are there to serve
as reminder of your love,to each other
don't let go,until the right time
comes along,when together you'll be one
Beautiful poem. I love this one. Good job. Did you enjoy
NYC? hope so.
Heather
those boundaries that you call
the distance that's so far
the yearning for your souls
and the feelings you control
but your poems are there to serve
as reminder of your love,to each other
don't let go,until the right time
comes along,when together you'll be one
a sweet poem and specially these two paras are making me think, its like the response of my new poem I wrote today and added under the title MISSING ETERNAL FACE... love thios poem...its really done well..thanks for comments dear friend