ON LIFE???

Life is a journey, no matter how you look at it.

Life is exciting, the moment you are born into it.

LIfe is rewarding, when you're born with a silver spoon.

Life is frustrating, when in the gutter, you are drawn.



But life is how we look at it, the moment we perceive.

It can be happy, or lonely, depends on how we play the

game,be careful how you treat it,cuz it can scar and it can

burn,the good news is when you're lucky,

Brad Pitt is your name.



Don't look back to your past, the present is the best.

The future, they always say, can take care of it's own.

Life is very short, be sure to bend some rules,

cause boredom is a long time,to grow old and to fret,

just talk to your maker, and tell him you got bored.








Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is one crazy poem,composed one crazy day, The beginning makes sense, but my ending is to be condemn..lol

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

Really like this especially line "life is how we look at it,the moment we perceive" Powerful line that says a lot. I don't agree with don't look back because as we go forward we can referenc past so we don't repeat things again we don't want and learn from it. As to stewing on the past in that vain I do agree with you. Like me for instance,not thrilled of my upcoming move but looking ahead to better days with some ideas in mind once I'm able to do what I need to do...

heatherburns35's picture

Hi Girl,
Very nice piece. i love it.
Been thinking about you.
I have been very busy.
Are still in the USA?
Be good, careful traveling.
I will answer your letter
in near future.