does it make sense?

I always get this comments,I like your poems Bing,

they are simple and not complicated

easy in the mind,not hard to understand



they are heartfelt at some times, funny and sublime

you can also cry,when your topics are not fun, but

most of the times, they are easy in the mind



so I say to all of this, why make them complicated,

why use the words so deep, and scramble for the books

when you can make them simple, for your soul to enjoy



life is how you make it, it can be happy and be sad

and if my poems bring you joy,and my inspiration

is my life.............does it make sense?






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rosalind's picture

Yes Vilma, it does make sense, you never know that poetic
writings are like words,it can heal a wounded soul,especially
when your works are visionary and flows in tandem with the
words of the creator of the universe.Yo never know!!!!!