bloody nose
pouring down my chin
bloody nose
let me run on in
grab a napkin
use a shirt
help me stop it
it wont hurt
the centire of life
a fourm of red cells
air is de-strifed
can't even talk
bloody nose
pouring down my chin
bloody nose
let me run on in
grab a napkin
use a shirt
help me stop it
it wont hurt
i'm bleeding out my nose
i'm bleeding out my nose
BLOOD!
I really enjoyed your poems and liked them..and wish if I do comments to few of them..the way you wrie is good and impressive and hope your heart will also be won by my peace thoughts if you go through..I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books and 7th one is soon expected which is about my peace thoughts critiques..hope your long comments on my few poems will also be added to it...and book will be soon in your hand...becaise i like talented friends..and you are..waiting for your lond comments to few of my poems if you wish to be published and recorded for ever in print way... afzal shauq afzalshauq@yahoo.com