bloody nose

bloody nose

pouring down my chin

bloody nose

let me run on in

grab a napkin

use a shirt

help me stop it

it wont hurt



the centire of life

a fourm of red cells

air is de-strifed

can't even talk



bloody nose

pouring down my chin

bloody nose

let me run on in

grab a napkin

use a shirt

help me stop it

it wont hurt

i'm bleeding out my nose

i'm bleeding out my nose



BLOOD!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

a quick rocker song...

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I really enjoyed your poems and liked them..and wish if I do comments to few of them..the way you wrie is good and impressive and hope your heart will also be won by my peace thoughts if you go through..I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books and 7th one is soon expected which is about my peace thoughts critiques..hope your long comments on my few poems will also be added to it...and book will be soon in your hand...becaise i like talented friends..and you are..waiting for your lond comments to few of my poems if you wish to be published and recorded for ever in print way... afzal shauq afzalshauq@yahoo.com