Gothic Illusions

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Gothic

I see through my eyes of the deep unknown-

Everything that is morbid within place

Of every other aspect of life-not known

To others as it is to me; my Gothic past

Is now my Gothic present. I cannot now

Turn back the past illusions the Goddesses

Of the Goths have sent me-they were

Simply in distress from their own depression

And agony fortell the darkness and fire

Of the living hell I face day from day

And night to night-binding with me

The shadows of darkness that englulfed

Me into this sad, lonely and forgotten

World. The Goddesses tell me now to hang

Tight to my strengths as the Fire Goddess.

They say they don't want me to die-

I'm very important to them as the

Goddess of Fire; my flames burn within

My soul when I'm sad or angry-

Or even depressed. I see Gothic Illusions-

No longer burning crosses, but

Instead, hearts of love and friendship.

The other Goddesses are sending these

To me because they support and care

About me and don't want me to do

Anything daft that could eventually

End my life one day. That's something

I'm thankful for-the support from

The Goddesses of Goths. Their strength

To help me through all my tough times

And support me when I'm depressed

And down. They're there for me when

No one else is. They care because

Not only am I of Wiccan belief,

But because they are my best friends

And I can talk to them when I

Need them the most-they are there

Because also other Wiccans and

Myself can talk to them and get

Support for the stuff they're going

Through. My belief in the Wiccan

Faith has helped me by far to

Be who I am for what I am,

No matter what I look on the outside.

The Goddesses of Goths have taught

Me that, and their Gothic Illusions

Will continue to be the best.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem today. I thought it would be for the best. I think now that it is stupid and not worth reading, but if readers read it, they'll pro'lly find something out of it. If they do, awesomeness. If they don't, cool cool, because they pro'lly feel the same way I do about this poem. Ah well, enough rambling.

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Essence Scott's picture

wow again...this is very good

dont ever put your work down..if you wrote it and had the courage to put it up here, knowing that it would be critiqued, then its good