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If you really do not want to be with me then don't call me tonight.............

I heard the phone ring

didn't                                     I?

I felt the tears falling

                                        didn't cry.

I watched you walk away from me

                                        didn't look back.

I heard my favorite song on the radio

                                        didn't sing.

Yeah I wrote you that letter

                                        didn't throw it away.

I picked up the phone to..

                                        didn't dial.

heard some laughter yet I

                                        didn't smile.

I fell asleep early last night

                                        didn't dream.

I woke up hoping but

                                       I didn't feel you.

Did



I?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Written 8/6/03 I know that's the longest title ever but that is exactly how this all came about.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 6:08am
©7 August 2003 - 1:28am — vettie
2 October 2005 - 3:14pm — chris
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Hi.
I just wanted to tell you, I really loved the piece. I do not think the title is that long. It is good. The title conveys the message. I like how it flows. I love the words as well.
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