WHEN SNOW FALLS



Like the spectacular hues of

Autumn leaves falling

I fell 4 U

colors changing, shades fading

the sun (like U ) evasive

colder faster, darker sooner

suddenly catching U off guard

(like me)

somedays I long 2 C the

leaves unchanged

although the beauty of them

intriques me

(like U )

Oh but when the snow

falls

will we?




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POSTED 9/25/02

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This is such a nice write. I'm new here and I just figured out how to send critique. I'll read more of yours in the near future. *S* Cynthia


Smile ... and the world will smile with you. - Author Cynthia Jones