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faded thoughts I think Fuck it I will fix this when im sober
Hi im drunk and im having a real good time,
I didnt have anything else to drink so I drank wine,
People call me an alcoholic but thats just fine,
I dont care as long as im having a good time,
People telling me to go to AA i just tell them there gay,
Shit, i kinda hate life anyway,
I hate therapists and what they always try to say like ”im and alcoholic im depressed, I shouldnt live this way , you had a fucked up childhood” fuck man im ok and I say Fuck you get the Fuck, away what kind of fucking game you trying to play,
I will figure this out if I just pray.
ok im done
-Miss. Miller
haha ya i got a few of those,
haha ya i got a few of those, although there are some that involve rolling but thats another story haha
Fuck it. Get drunk and
Fuck it. Get drunk and embrace it.
Love it! My kind of ------!
Love it! My kind of ------! ;) cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you
Thank you
-Miss. Miller
Blame it on the a a a a a alcohol
When I read the poem I did not see the punctuation, it was too loud a read and the emotion and plaints overwhelmed all considerations, actually. When your're faced, you don't sweat the details, that's for editors. I drink a little, in moderation, (I tried everything wet between 18 and 30 then tapered off) because I come from alkies, all of 'em except me and one sister of three siblings. Aunts uncles, cousins, in-laws wasted all the time and they could not write a poem this fine between them. I call this kind of write a purge poem - like the poet said, "Get 'em!" - allets
Ha thank you for that we are
Ha thank you for that we are all misunderstood some times and its good to have someone to understand even if its just about some thing as small as this. No ome,can understand something they havent been through but we can always try so I thank you but im not mad at that girl or anything she probably meant well but thanks again!
-Miss. Miller
there are a lot of typos and
there are a lot of typos and grammar errors in it
"People telling me to go to aa(AA) i(I) just tell them there(they're) gay,"
"I shouldnt(shouldn't) live this way(,) you had a fucked up childhood”
"I say Fuck you get the Fuck,( ) away "
I think the anger in this poem would come across better if it weren't in rhyme, personally I believe to each their own and everyone does what they need to heal, cope, and move on, but there may be merit in not drinking, it is one of the worse ways to numb things as it is a depressant and can make you feel worse when you sober up, or if things are bad enough it can make you feel suicidal when alone and drunk, not to mention if you are drunk enough it is easier to take advantage of you. That being said if you wanna drink then drink. but maybe people aren't trying to play a game maybe they just care?
Much Love
Ashley
Therapist
The world seen through the bottom of a bourbon bottle, or wine if you drank all the bourbon, is different. At least she has a therapist - and she's talking about her...that will or will not work, but she's talking to us and that's good for the soul to cleanse and look up, look at the screen, a kind of therapy - poetry AA, same difference, two is a group they told me in sociology - Alcoholics see everything differently - like cigarettes, addiction is addiction. The poem is saying to me that she jsut needs her space right now. - I remain yours, most respectfully, allets
thank you
thank you
-Miss. Miller
Thank you for commenting but
Thank you for commenting but like I said I was drunk and yes I miss spelled lots of shit and it doesn't make much sense but like I said I was DRUNK and even if I was sober writing this poem it would still be good because no madder what kind of poem its still a feeling that some has about something and if you dont like it good because I have read some of your stuff and did not think that it was all to special but I didnt say anything about it. No madder who wrote the poem or what kind of poem it is you still need to respect it and that person who wrote it. Not to be like one of those people that say you dont know me stay out of my shit and everything but you really dont know me although this poem dose not make sense to you it may make sense to me or someone who knows me. I admit I do not have to best grammar, punctuation, or spelling but I still try its better than not trying at all and not learning anything. Im not trying to be a bitch im just responding to the comment you left I do like constructive criticism but not negative comments that put people down. Not everyone writes the same way I like to rhyme, you dont, ok but the great thing about creativity is is that its all different. Thank you for you comment.
-Miss. Miller
I am sorry but was this
was this addressed to me?
Much Love
Ashley
Yes
Yes
-Miss. Miller
Get em!
Get em!
I genuinely think that is a
I genuinely think that is a great poem.
Rhyme Time
I agree, I like this poem, it is great! There is merit in anger poems without rhymes - but she avers that she is happy, chemically induced of course, but happy and so the rhymes reflect perfectly her state at the time of the write. - allets
Is there a fuss? I can't see
Is there a fuss? I can't see anything negative in the comment, just some wise observations in an opinion,
I think written as is has merit, but also could be way more powerful if grammar puts across its intent perfectly, that said my grammar sucks read my bio, but I can still appreciate everyone's comments and ideas as valid I'm neither agreeing or disagreeing just digesting it all. :) it's good to try new things or enjoy different points of views hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
i agree completely
i agree completely
Thank you! Lol
Thank you! Lol
-Miss. Miller