flooding tears

my tears keep falling

like raindrops in a storm

flooding my brain

so no solution can be formed



an avalanche of thoughts

crunching my common sense

barely liveing my life

surrounded by this invisable fence



an electric shock

freezing my brain

caused by the lightning

and the flood of the rain

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let me say again and again the same words from the core of my heart that..love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poetess and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq