my tears keep falling
like raindrops in a storm
flooding my brain
so no solution can be formed
an avalanche of thoughts
crunching my common sense
barely liveing my life
surrounded by this invisable fence
an electric shock
freezing my brain
caused by the lightning
and the flood of the rain
let me say again and again the same words from the core of my heart that..love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poetess and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq