Good night to the moon

Goodnight to the moon

I'll say to the sky

To every star

I'll say my goodbyes



This is the last time

I'll say good night

I'll close my eyes

with the last of the moonlight



I'll say Goodbye to the sky

with my head in the grass

I'll sleep forever

Tonight will be my last

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Karyn Indursky's picture

I'm surprised this isn't in your Depression folder yet. But that's not what I came to say. I like how simple the text is, but how complex the content is. I've felt like lying down and lying myself. The thoughts at the time aren't what's complicated, but what I'm feeling like your poem. I've read other poems I could relate to, but I felt a much sharper connection with this one. It's nice to not feel alone in depression, but it's sad to know what you have to go through to feel as I do. God bless.