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What Makes A Man
I feel so grown,
i didnt see what hit me,
but it must have been reality with a truck.
i feel alive, i feel beautiful.
so spacious, so clear.
so calm and collected.
i am ready for everything to happen.
i am done learning from my mistakes.
its time to start building.
foundations that will last forever in my heart.
i now have the materials and the knowledge to do so.
it starts with you,
a young heart no need for your name.
but its time i show everyone how much right i can do.
and ill start buy confessing my admirations to your essence, your beauty.
i am attracted, i am infatuated. but it doesnt stop there.
i want to wake you up, every morning with a smile and bed breakfast.
to take care of you when you are sick. to pick you up when you are down.
a best friend and a lover. a believer, and a motivator.
the motion picture love life is what i have in mind,
i see i am still a ghost, you see right through me.
and life has no instructions on what to say.
so i will say it how it, how i believe you would want me to say it.
if i i wait for the right time i will surely miss it.
so i will tell you on my time.
i am ready to be an everything to someone.
this is my definition to progress
this is what makes a man.
This is awsome!!!
This is hands down one of the best I've read, a few technical tweaks accepted, I love what you say here and how you say it. The last lines are profound, definately a real man in my books! BRAVO! SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thank you. soo much. your
thank you. soo much. your comments always brighten my day :)))
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