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Daddy i m scared
Daddy , i m scared said the little girl
where are you daddy?
Daddy , i m scared about life
i need you daddy
it is the voice of that little girl hidden inside of me
that little girl who never really knew her father
that little girl who never had a good relationship
that little girl who just want her daddy 's arms around her
Why daddy , said the voice of that young woman
why daddy?
why arent you there when i needed you ?
why arent you pay more attention to me ?
why arent you treat me with love and care?
Why Daddy?
Daddy, im scared
said the voice of that little girl who is reaching out inside for her father!
i kno exactly how u feel. i
i kno exactly how u feel. i dont kno my dad and it really does make life alot more difficult then it should be.
I would change a few words
I would change a few words around in a few sentence such as "Why Cant you be here when I need you daddy" "Why dont you pay more attention to me " Up to you it is your work from your heart and soul . just a few suggestions . other than that it would read better ... Sorry ..
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
thank you for your suggestion
thank you for your suggestion and do not feel sorry
i do not think about grammar when im writing , i just go with my emotions .
feel free to correct me
Shellange
Then go with the flow....
Then go with the flow.... Same here , so much I correct before I post and I make quiet a few chnges before and sometimes after .. Again welcome to Post poems .....
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......