...what you look for is not to be found
in these words, or any other manifestation
of your ego
if you be offended, then it is you to blame
if you are elated, then it is you to blame
if you are confused, then it is you to blame
if it is judgment you pass, then it is you
convicted
if it is truth you seek, then it is in you
the pain
if it is wisdom you long for, then it is in you
the sustenance
i think the tao te ching just got an 82nd chapter -
this poem should be added - its power thru its simplicity makes it timeless - every word counts - any addition would subtract from it - nice piece -
yep. I agree with what you said. I enjoyed this poem.
Straight, to the point, making a damn good point. LOVED IT!!!!!