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Midnight Affair





                   It started at High Noon

                   and ended at the break of dawn

                   dawn - champaign

                   the entertainment began with a

                   thought

                   thought brought along a friend

                   now the wild adventure

                   is to begin

                   bets were placed

                   plans were made

                   stakes were laid

                   games played

                   rolls portrayed to the end

                   as common lusts ascend

                   Midnight Affair

                   once a dream

                   now a forethought

                   then a memory

                   passions furried

                   ectacies were raised

                   twisted stories

                   all that matters

                   is that we got laid

                   Midnight Affair

                   -it started at High Noon...

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©27 November 2002 - 11:23am — ultimprv
26 October 2004 - 11:41am — Sandy Cowan (not verified)
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I enjoyed this poem. The sudden change of style at the end seems so well timed to me.

Sandy

18 May 2003 - 11:24pm — ~Angie E~ (not verified)
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Hey, this is some deep passion!!.. LOL.. You portray a clear intertwining of hearts and feelings here.. Keep writing. I enjoy this one a lot.. Peace!

27 November 2002 - 9:16pm — Johannah Doll (not verified)
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It sounded so romantic and passionate...up until "all that matters is that we got laid"...lol. It's a great poem!
Johannah