Phenomenally Speaking

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                   Phenomenal = Fucking



                   Phenomenal Dick with his

                   Phenomenal Head up his

                   Phenomenal Ass

                   Phenomenally Speaking of course



                   Phenomenal Dick representing the

                   Phenomenal Justice system, dedicated to

                   Phenomenal Up-starting persecution

                   Phenomenally Speaking of course



                   Phenomenal Bed-side manner includes

                   Phenomenal Pissing away the lives of Black children

                   Phenomenal Chinese are Black

                   Phenomenal Latinos are Black

                   Phenomenal Dick feeling that Blacks are no longer worthy of

                   being Black

                   Phenomenally Speaking of course



                   Phenomenal Dick dreams of ways to put the

                   Phenomenal Screws of defecation into the dreams of children

                   giving

                   Phenomenal Life to youth full nightmares

                   Phenomenally Speaking of course



                   Phenomenal Dick with his

                   Phenomenal Head up his

                   Phenomenal Ass

                   Phenomenally Speaking of course

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This started off as an amusement piece, then an incident with the justice system and my son gave shape to an unfinished product

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raila's picture

First off, leave it up to your creative self to come up with a fashionable way to cuss.

'Phenomenal Dick feeling that Blacks are no longer worthy of being Black'

When I read this line I had to stop and catch my breath. To me this one line spoke volumes and volumes and volumes! The poem itself I rate as one of your best because of its creativity and its content. You went above and beyond on this piece and I love it. Thank you for writing it and thank you for sharing it! One


RaiLa

Lucas Octavius Nixon's picture

YEAH, that's a tight piece!
You have an amazing talent and I enjoy reading your toughts!
This is one of the best poems I've read in a while!
I'll be checking your work out!

Holla back!

Suivatco/octaviuS