I withdraw from the sap
An entity in a sea of popularity
Crusing through life unnoticed
Living what seems life meaningless
Chatter cruises through my mind
Hearing all, yet nothing
Seeing a blur of humanity
Not making out any shapes
Time seems suspended
Dragging on forevermore
Life goes on around me
Not including me in its schemes
well done a great love and lovely poem..mean it that this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace
hey man ,dont worry at all,a poet has to be withdrawn
atleast for a while to write something ,to play with feelings ,if i may say so.
So dont worry , u got nice talent keep working , I wish u
very best of luck.