Withdrawn

I withdraw from the sap

An entity in a sea of popularity

Crusing through life unnoticed

Living what seems life meaningless



Chatter cruises through my mind

Hearing all, yet nothing

Seeing a blur of humanity

Not making out any shapes



Time seems suspended

Dragging on forevermore

Life goes on around me

Not including me in its schemes

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem was wriiten after my high school grad banquet. This portion was geared towards people that had dates, and everyone else was not included in it. I was one of the people that did not have a date and just was annoyed at the whole thing, so I wrote this.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

well done a great love and lovely poem..mean it that this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace

San's picture

hey man ,dont worry at all,a poet has to be withdrawn
atleast for a while to write something ,to play with feelings ,if i may say so.
So dont worry , u got nice talent keep working , I wish u
very best of luck.