I am a sinner,
But still a believer,
Take away my soul,
But not my spirit,

I’m here forever,
A soul without a body,
No light to guide me,
I am a sinner.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is the first poem I have written, its free verse. Thinking of getting into poetry, please tell me your thoughts.

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LostInTranslation's picture

who am i to say, but

i think it's the start of something new. i like it.. the words really speak for themselves

-- Jordan <3

TylerHealey_96's picture


Thanks so much, ill be posting another one very shortly that I just wrote, im thinking of putting a book together of poems.

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Your first poem got you inside - welcome - read read read - then write from what inspires you, makes you think about the world - Lady A