I am a sinner, But still a believer, Take away my soul, But not my spirit,
I’m here forever, A soul without a body, No light to guide me, I am a sinner.
This is the first poem I have written, its free verse. Thinking of getting into poetry, please tell me your thoughts.
i think it's the start of something new. i like it.. the words really speak for themselves
-- Jordan <3
Thanks so much, ill be posting another one very shortly that I just wrote, im thinking of putting a book together of poems.
Your first poem got you inside - welcome - read read read - then write from what inspires you, makes you think about the world - Lady A
who am i to say, but
i think it's the start of something new. i like it.. the words really speak for themselves
-- Jordan <3
Thanks
Thanks so much, ill be posting another one very shortly that I just wrote, im thinking of putting a book together of poems.
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Your first poem got you inside - welcome - read read read - then write from what inspires you, makes you think about the world - Lady A