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always expecting and never forgetting

of the man he wants me to be

can I forgive him, he wants me to be him

I don't think he will ever see

with a coming of ages I go through my stages

will I ever be me

he makes me feel sorrow that will be there tommrow

my only problem is he

Author's Notes/Comments: 

it hurt to write this one

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poetvg's picture

i agree ive
been down that
road before
and it hurt .
and it suxed .

Eric Duerr's picture

I'm sure everyone goes through similar things like this all the time...i'd like to see more than just the PROBLEM in your poetry, find an answer--stop focusing on the negative so much, there is more out there believe it or not.

hawksquaw99's picture

now this one I can really relate to ... my grandmother is one of those that wants me to be something that is so not me....LOL... I liked this one alot.....

Leigh Petty's picture

I really loved this one.