Angel

Tell my lips to undo tears they press
Never tell the angel I'm in hell
But you know me ever so well
Never the less, you can tell when I'm in distress
Sometimes it falls dead on a kiss, oooooohh...
When I wish, and when I yearn for you to stay
You go and fly away
You let it burn
I'm left to wonder if i'll ever learn
Don't you want to know how I've been
I'm not the same as you know when I was smiling, no
I want you to know, but maybe you shouldn't know
Because it wouldn't change at all
But I'm crying, oooohh...
Your glow could swallow my heart ache whole
Follow where the lights have dimmed low
I need an angel to soar to come and save my soul
Some kind of beautiful
Some kind of wonderful
Some kind of wonder wall
You said if you lost your wings you'd come running
Come towards the screams
I'm calling, but I can't hear you coming
Where were you when I needed you here
I stare where you were but that's no where near
It's one thing that these tears don't mention
Careless love and affection lead me to think your heart was heaven
If I'd heard the cracking sound
It wipe it off, and pick it back up off the ground
But, for lovers sake
I never heard my heart break
I want you to know, but maybe you shouldn't know
Because it wouldn't change at all
But I'm crying, ooohh...
Someone tell... The angel... I'm in hell
You're some kind of beatiful
Some kind of wonderful
Some kind of wonder wall

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Bloodbutterfly's picture

Wonderful

I love your writing it is full of emotion, and just as before said it makes me want to keep reading.


You can only be as beautiful as you tell yourself you are, but you can't let beauty get to your head.

KemistryKia's picture

LOVE this

the raw emotion

the energy of the words

the fact that every line

EVERY line 

makes the reader excited for the next,

great job ! 


KemistryKia ")