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Crucify my love

Because you're blind



Crucify my love

And it's me you'll find

Crucify my love

Would you set me free



Crucify my love

And it's me you'll see

Crucify my love

Yet you won't let go



Crucify my love

And it's me you'll show

Crucify my love

Please just let me die



Crucify my love

It's just one big lie...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

errr....the quotes are because the title is from a song by the band X-Japan so it of course inspired this O.o

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 5:46am
©24 September 2002 - 9:47am — twilight_stranger
5 October 2002 - 7:53pm — Christina Veal (not verified)
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I'm all about endings, how you leave the reader feeling, and I say great job with this one! You summed up all that you were trying to convey with a simple word: "lie".