Bottom Of The Ocean

A burning plain

Yellow dirt and sand

Hurts the eyes

 

The car branded

And boiling

The back tire spinning

Buried

 

The picnic set there

A blue cloth layed out

We lie shirtless

Waiting for the tow truck

 

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Very clever: you created an

Very clever: you created an idyllic moment in the center of a storm of trouble, making that spot of pleasure more powerful. A potent story told in less than a minute. I love!