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Forever
I have forsaken all others
In wait for you
Oh how I long to behold you
To hold you
To know you
Face to face
To feel your embrace
Your presence is intoxicating
Divine
My desire is to touch you
Make you mine
See your smile
Hold you for awhile
In the comfort of your arms
Where I belong
Rest assured you will be mine
For all of time
Our love will last
For you I dance
Forever entranced
I seriously loved it with one slight change needed....that you would know that I want to be your soulmate....but I guess only time could take care of that Lorena.
Love,
Keith
It seems to me that you thought about this for too long. I don't know, could jsut be a me thing.
It flows well for a few lines, then jerks liekyou had tho think of a line... then flows again.
T'is not bad.