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My Tao
This path I walk
Rough and challenging
Steadfast and sure
The journey leads me
My destination is sure
Promises unfold
For this I am told
Complete me
My heart is whole
My tongue satisfied
I see good days
I walk in His ways
My pathway is peace
It calls my name
It whispers proclaim
For freedom I long
Free I will be
For as I follow
So shall I be
All the days long
He fills me with song
My joy is complete
For Him I shall meet
Transformed in a moment I will be
Just wait and see
He desires me
He longs for me to come near
To touch my heart
For we shall never part
Always will be
Him and me
I rest in His presence
He holds me there
At times when I am weary
He strengthens me
My rock and my fortress
My refuge in times of fear
He covers me, embraces me and holds me near
Comforts my soul
With just one touch I am whole
I lay bare before Him
Nothing unseen
He despises me not
Though at times I am unclean
He gently washes and soothes my soul
As I cry out
He whispers gently "I know"
My pain is real and hurt lingers there
As I surrender
He draws near
With just one touch you see
He heals the pain in me
I now stand strong
In Him is where I belong
A great spiritual testimony! Bravo!
Starward
A beautiful work of art. Creates very vivid mental imagery and shows much potential torwards Lauri's future writings. I'm looking forward to reading more!
I came upon your invitation looking for words on a page.
What I found was an outpouring of your heart.
This poety is deep and I spent hours trying to capture its essence and have yet to make a good start.
Bob Abston
Excellent work, Lauri. Tis the first of your work I have seen. I especially love the lines..."Though at times I am unclean...He gently washes and soothes my soul...As I cry out...He whispers gently "I know"....One feels the comfort offered in your piece. Thank you for sharing this work of love. God bless you, my sweet sister in Christ.
Love you,
'Lass'
:D pretty
i thought it was very passionate, well-grammered, simple, but with elegence; spiritual.