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Woven Heartaches.
Loves shattered vase glass blades cut sharply.
In constant reminder.
Uninterrupted despair of those diamond eyes.
A cry in tuned with earths subtle heartbeat.
Veining outward with swirling colors of ab-truths.
Difference found in times of those framed memories.
Lies of the heart broken voice.
A beautiful melody woven unto you.
Reminiscent of those tears in the air.
Unintentional lashes.
I feel those cuts as if my own.
I'm so sorry.
Plea of my voice.
This angels wings are broken.
Withered roses bleed no more.
Holding down the sensation of a windswept screams.
Ruins of a once grand union of two battle worn people.
Dark interruptions of this feeble mind.
Digging deep into feeling buried so long ago.
This song is woven into you as much as it is me.
My apologies to our meeting.
I cant say regrets were made from me.
Weaving brands in bleeding hearts.
I'm so sorry for causing grief more than your needed relief.
A heart sings in a whisper.
songs to two woven heartaches
Deep
Your first line drew me in and I found a deep penetrating meaning within every line. This poem is intense, full of emotion and despair. I really like it! I would say one thing that stuck out to me for revising purposes, (Which doesn't mean I am right, the beauty of poetry is its freedom) was this line - "Holding down the sensation of a windswept screams". Within this sentence I think you may have ment to write scream.. or leave out the a.. it just doesn't fit with the sentence and throws off the rhythm. The "a" is singular and "screams" plural... just my two cents :) I would love to be told these things myself thats why I am here so please don't take offense. This is a work of art.. please keep sharing!