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I hope my heart stays strong, unbreakable.
I venture where I'll need strength:
pain past tears could be my fate
I've tried before, but I was a failure;
the race of Hearts must yet be run.
Sometimes numb, afraid to move; if I ache,
may it be brief!!
We went so high!! Oh!, how remarkable!!
In attaining Heaven we succeeded,
even after we thought it too late!
There is a chance for Love, I'm sure,
and we'll have courage when it's done,
so we can bring new life to Love;
so Love can bring us back to Life!
Oh!, let ME love again!!
Masterful work. Beautiful sentiments that make the reader hope this love works out well for you, and urge you on.
Vive l'amour!