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to have love and lost How and Why
I backed down
Like always I Faulted
Cracking like a
Sheet of glass
Slowly weaving a web
That will weave my end
Or a beginning
Which I can’t tell
Lost between the shards
I hide myself
My thoughts
Like they are Toxic
Keeping all to myself
Lost as to what happened
Just wishing I knew what
To do,
Yet at the same time I wish
I didn’t feel so alone.
We all feel this way at times its just a part of the depression that strickens us there is a time when it gets better
James Darr Author of Poetry's New Leash On Life
Owner of the Poet's Library
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I really enjoyed your poem. As a matter of fact, it's the first random poem I've recieved that's actually been good. :) Very supple imagery with the glass and the web.
Clinton, there are some good expressions in this poem which show promise.Keep writing.
Smile.. it is the cheapest facelift.
I like this very much. It's very moody, so to speak and very well written. I like the wording especially. I did stumble over the "sheet of glass" to "slowly weaving a web". There's no mention of a spider. Very good any way for a moody poem.
Awesome poem! I hope you continue to post!