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Critique
Well here it is
My third poem today
Would it matter to you
If I threw it away?
I thought about it
It crossed my mind
To burn it or leave it
Where no one can find
But I thought what the hell
I wrote it I'll post it
If it's meant to be
You'll let me know it
You search this site
It's poetry you seek
You read and read
But never critique
I write with feeling
I write in vain
To know that these are read
Might ease the pain
So please oh please
If you read, then write
Critique My poems
So I don't lose sight...
lol.. i think the same things when im writing a poem. i dont know whether or not i should post them b/c sometimes theyre directed at certain ppl, but i figure its the only way to get my feelings across so, hey, what the hell? - i like your writing style, its cool.
poetry is a calling from the heart never give it up!Keep writing ,keep smiling Ruth Lovejoy-poetrylady