wen i wake up i see sumthin strange thats near ; like an illusive creature i make niqqaz think i invented fear ; so my nerves start to urk with in this body as my bed rumbles upon this earth ; & My skin lies here untouched but my soul is so bruised ; tormented by these demons that i had sent out to u ; cuz with all the conflicted hatred i kept embodied inside ; ur punishment deserves to be heard worldwide : dam jus call me the devil with the pen ; Writing ritual curses with my nails on niqqas who say amen ; Here again with out a heart in this body ; & u would think cause I had no soul that I fucks with illuminati ; I should burn u where u stand ; dnt compare me to that slime ; Yea they had a soul that they carelessly sold for dimes ; yea I had a soul but I happily stabbed mines ; & but to the contrary my path is more benign ; killing niqqas ina row like i gotta Deadline ; & don't worry I keep my promises when I lie ; dnt believe me ? Well then let me jus swear to god as I cry ; how bout now ? Did I conflicted ur mind ; do u understand what I'm saying ; am I as clear as a mime ? Do i gotta eat ur brain to understand if u mind ? I mean I kno I swallowed ur tongue but that's no excuse to be shy ; & well yea ikno I fractured ur spine & may have slit ur throat with this knife ; but dam .. At least have the courtesy to look devil in the eye '
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This is killer.
This is killer.
Thank you, i wanted to create
Thank you, i wanted to create sort of a creepy type feel to this poem but at the same time creating a story. At the end of the poem it reveals that the whole time the devil was talkin to the guy, the guy was dead already on a kitchen table chair because the devil was eatting his body parts the whole time while talking nonsense to him .. well at least thats what was happening in my head but idk if i made that image seem clear enough in the poem. lol
I definitely got that vibe
I definitely got that vibe and the story did make sense, but we all take things with different meaning. Either way, i know where you're coming from and I can relate.
awesome && yea true true ;
awesome && yea true true ; thank you once again i really aprreciate the comments and opinions. i'll be sure to check your poems out too to return the favor.
Thanks, bro. More like this
Thanks, bro. More like this one will be coming soon. I'd appreciate the feedback.