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Love Poems Yea u be feeling me & I be feeling u too // playing darts with our hearts like we on some voodoo // I get u all confused making u feel like a fool but deep inside this heart // I'm really loving u // & there's no doubt in dis mind dat somehow u will be mine // sign on da dotted line // caps bold & underline // took a chance & underwrote // to u I always wrote // becuz baby u my one true evernote // & I be watching ur heart like I'm ur heart proctor // recharging our love like Ima battery doctor // dat mystery hell flyer // doing ninjumps over ur heart till our love expires // & I'll risk my life & climb to any feet // become that rhythm spirit & make ur heart beat // cuz our love jus flows // cuz u're my art of glow // barcode scan & I read ur heart is gold // but they say it's suicidal wen u in love too deep // but it's wen I look at u dat I take dat leap // becuz if I dnt believe in faith // den I believe in us // & if I dnt believe in us den I dnt believe in trust // & I trust dat love is a must // so stop with da flirting baby & let me get u in cuffs ~
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flirting love
I like this poem. I like the use of imagery. U compare yourself to addicting things in a girls mind. Everyone wants a guy who does the impossible for them. I believe you got that idea. It makes you think when you read what u lack from a relationship. It gives you butterflies . well at least for me it . I imagined when me woudl do the impossible for a girl being a true gentleman. "but they say it's suicidal wen u in love too deep // but it's wen I look at u dat I take dat leap // becuz if I dnt believe in faith // den I believe in us // & if I dnt believe in us den I dnt believe in trust // & I trust dat love is a must // so stop with da flirting baby & let me get u in cuffs" . brought me to another world. yes love is a test but u have to be willing to take it. Overall well done. i give it a 6 from1-10.