my daily haiku feb 11, 2004

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Haiku

two kingfishers

glide over river

i on my way to job interview



lord krishna presence

a butterfly glides into train

i take to interview

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I don't want this to be taken in the wrong way, but isn't a haiku a 17-syllable poem, where the first and 3rd lines consist of 5 syllables each and the 2nd contains 7 syllables?
i understand if this is the way you prefer to write, but then it isn't a haiku.