My Daily Haiku FEB 01, 2004

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the ticking of

his fake rolex


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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

I don't understand this one could you mail me an explain?

Karyn Indursky's picture

This isn't a haiku. It doesn't make any sense either. I think you've had a couple years break to give objectivity. So, back and fix it. Then e-mail me the fixed version and I'll give you a new comment. Thanks.

charisma's picture

Very nice senryu, made me smile.